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At 2:00pm on October 11, 2012, Pre-AP Dragon Den said…

Remember, it needs to be a general statement.  Also, you are missing an announcement handle.  You are oooooohhhhhh so close.  Try one more time nad I think it will be there!

At 10:12pm on October 9, 2012, Pre-AP Dragon Den said…

the theme of the story is forgiveness to those who sin. God "gives us a inch and we take a mile " . And when we dont succeed, we ask forgiveness in wich we think we dont deserve.

This statement says a lot.  Remember your statement cannot be too broad/general.  I underlined the part in quotations simply because it is a cliche.  You have to be careful about putting too many ideas into one theme statement.  Choose one theme idea that you wish to focus on and go with it.  Also, remember- you need a handle, "The Prodigal Son reveals/ exposes/shows/ ...."

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